Hmm, the axleboxes look a little odd - I wonder how familiar Dave is/was with Eastleigh locos. I also wonder whether you've got the stretcher in the right way round, although I'm not familiar with the kit to know whether it's designed to look like that. If so, it too would be a little odd...
Does the kit cover both Urie and Maunsell locos? I know it's got the Urie cab that was fitted to the first batch of Maunsell locos, but does it also have the different boiler, steam pipes and smoke deflectors to allow a Urie loco to be built?
I'll be interested to see how you get on with this, it's a kit I'd very much like to build. Should I ever find the time!
Steph