Steve,
Am I allowed to say I prefer the photos you have taken to the magazine shots? Especially the outside ones from August last year, they look far more real to me. Something about the magazine shots just doesn't look right and makes me think of Thomas and friends. I think it is the bright sunshine appearance and blue sky with the lack of hard shadows. Changing the sky to one with high cloud or light overcast could make sense of the fuzzy shadows. If realism is the aim, losing a bit of focus in the distance is not a bad thing either.